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Review of skyrim flaws by Skyrim man

skyrim has it's flaws like the war


Well Skyrim man doesn't start out to well, no capital letter at the start of a sentence has already made this blog seem poorly written however it picks up in the middle as he remembers to put in the apostrophe for the word "it's". Very creative of Skyrim man to use the words "flaws and war" in an attempt to rhyme, however I think it would have been much more effective if he said "wars" instead of "war", although, still a good try. Oh!... Bad move, it seems he left out the full stop at the end which just like the missing capital letter doesn't make the overall appearnace of the blog visually appealing.

And now for the final verdict. (Drum role please)

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AVERAGE!

Overall the blog could have been better if there was a bit more content, the missing capital letter and full stop didn't help, I am not trying to be a grammar nazi but I can't help but feel that the blog would be a lot better if half of the necessary punctuation wasn't missing. However the fact that it almost rhymed has to count for something, right?


Disagree with the verdict? Feel free to tell me how you would have rated the blog. :)